DirtyAngel Posted July 18, 2015 Report Posted July 18, 2015 so it was pointed out that I might get more feedback if I had a thread, so here we go. Oh and its ok to just drop by and say hi to Sugar. Quote
DirtyAngel Posted July 18, 2015 Author Report Posted July 18, 2015 so on to review responses for Choices: Than: I know, Magus said I should have a cliffhanger so... JoeLong: Yeah she's looking but doesn't seem to be any normal girls out there. And she'll share a few more escapades in flashbacks Rescue: Yeah, he helped a lot, there's a few places he basically wrote it and it was so much better I left it in. Gave him a by line even. And it could be hubby... Sniper: Thanks, I know its a little rough in places but I'm learning And yeah, Magus is kinda addicted to saturday matinee serials LOL, OMG how's are hero get out of that one? Thanks again for the nice welcome. So there you go. Hope you all enjoyed it and am writing chapter two now, but I'm a bit slow...please be patient with me Quote
WillowDarkling Posted July 19, 2015 Report Posted July 19, 2015 Hey, DirtyAngel. I moved this topic, since it did not belong in the Personal rants and journals forum. But, welcome to the rodeo, and hope you have fun. Quote
DirtyAngel Posted July 19, 2015 Author Report Posted July 19, 2015 oh, thanks Willow. Wasn't sure where it went so I figured Rants was safe Quote
Rescue25 Posted July 23, 2015 Report Posted July 23, 2015 Found your page. Now we can rattle your chain in two places or maybe three. You do show up well with your first chapter. "We" want more. no big rush but a chapter today would be nice. Between you and M a chapter every 2-3 days?? We can wish can't we. B Flexy68 1 Quote
DirtyAngel Posted July 23, 2015 Author Report Posted July 23, 2015 he's pretty much done with his but with our daughter being here he hasn't written much, the slacker Rescue25 and Flexy68 2 Quote
Rescue25 Posted July 26, 2015 Report Posted July 26, 2015 I was wondering about the change. Personal preference is fine as long as no outside pressure. B Quote
DirtyAngel Posted July 26, 2015 Author Report Posted July 26, 2015 nope, i'm easily bored with stuff, tend to change thing on my own Quote
DirtyAngel Posted July 26, 2015 Author Report Posted July 26, 2015 (edited) my not actually my birthday present nevermind, pic wont download Edited July 26, 2015 by DirtyAngel Quote
DirtyAngel Posted July 27, 2015 Author Report Posted July 27, 2015 YAY! Chapter two is up...I know I'm slow, but I'm still a newbie at this writing stuff Ok hope you enjoy chapter two Flexy68 1 Quote
Rescue25 Posted July 27, 2015 Report Posted July 27, 2015 Very much enjoyed the chapter. You learned from the best. I can feel the emotion. Saw your spoiler on the SB about only one more chapter. Hope that is wrong. There is much more to the story/your life. B Quote
DirtyAngel Posted July 28, 2015 Author Report Posted July 28, 2015 Very much enjoyed the chapter. You learned from the best. I can feel the emotion. Saw your spoiler on the SB about only one more chapter. Hope that is wrong. There is much more to the story/your life. B thanks, magus helps a lot, probably could tell that Rescue25 1 Quote
Rescue25 Posted July 28, 2015 Report Posted July 28, 2015 You have similar styles. but it is to be expected that the student would be similar to the instructor. You didn't comment on the spoiler. B Quote
DirtyAngel Posted July 28, 2015 Author Report Posted July 28, 2015 You have similar styles. but it is to be expected that the student would be similar to the instructor. You didn't comment on the spoiler. B That was actually about Magus, evidently Max and crew are being difficult again. I told him to kill them all, he could wrap the story up in two chapters. He said he could do it in one Pretty sure its not gonna happen though. LOL Flexy68 and Rescue25 2 Quote
DirtyAngel Posted July 31, 2015 Author Report Posted July 31, 2015 more review responses for Choices first thanks for all the positive feedback. Tahn: It gets sadder Sniper: yeah, Sam is based on someone very close to me, as for naming characters, they are take offs of the people we know, the names sound less fake that way, Magus does the same thing. As for if she tells Sam, well you'll just have to wait Rescue: Thanks Rescue25 1 Quote
DirtyAngel Posted July 31, 2015 Author Report Posted July 31, 2015 Ok, chapter three is posted, this one makes me a bit nervous so... Rescue25 and Flexy68 2 Quote
Rescue25 Posted July 31, 2015 Report Posted July 31, 2015 I understand the nervous comment. Is "Lucas" still alive and if so in the U.S.? Keep going. Well written. Like the twins said sometimes you have to let it out. B Quote
Rescue25 Posted August 4, 2015 Report Posted August 4, 2015 (edited) Now that Mangus has thrown a large pile on us it's your turn Hope yours is not as upsetting as his. At least yours is past tense. B Edited August 4, 2015 by Rescue25 Quote
DirtyAngel Posted August 4, 2015 Author Report Posted August 4, 2015 Now that Mangus has thrown a large pile on us it's your turn Hp[e yours is not as upsetting as his. At least yours is past tense. B its pretty sad Quote
DirtyAngel Posted August 5, 2015 Author Report Posted August 5, 2015 Yay, chapter 4 of choices is done and posted Quote
Tahn Posted August 5, 2015 Report Posted August 5, 2015 I declare that we should form a committee of your friends and fans, and do us a little hunting down of a certain person. Flexy68 and Rescue25 2 Quote
magusfang Posted August 5, 2015 Report Posted August 5, 2015 I declare that we should form a committee of your friends and fans, and do us a little hunting down of a certain person. Oh no, if she ever says yes he's mine and mine alone! He'll wish he was with the twins again! I had forgotten how she was when we first met, by the Tim she finished the first flashback I wanted to hunt him down and skin him inch by bloody inch! Flexy68 and Rescue25 2 Quote
DirtyAngel Posted August 5, 2015 Author Report Posted August 5, 2015 Oh no, if she ever says yes he's mine and mine alone! He'll wish he was with the twins again! I had forgotten how she was when we first met, by the Tim she finished the first flashback I wanted to hunt him down and skin him inch by bloody inch! my baby! I think he loves me! Rescue25 and Flexy68 2 Quote
Rescue25 Posted August 5, 2015 Report Posted August 5, 2015 my baby! I think he loves me! Like you ever had a doubt???? B Quote
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